http://www.sfwp.com/archives/206 Mon, 06 Feb 2012 15:18:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://www.sfwp.com/archives/206#comment-200 Sherrie Wed, 16 Sep 2009 13:49:48 +0000 http://sfwp.org/2008/05/27/imagined-jubilation-by-literary-awards-finalist-caryn-coyle/#comment-200 This one was good Caryn. I would love to see you again soon. My new number is 443-636-0554. Much love! S This one was good Caryn. I would love to see you again soon. My new number is 443-636-0554. Much love! S

]]> http://www.sfwp.com/archives/206#comment-199 Dan Cuddy Sat, 14 Jun 2008 00:27:46 +0000 http://sfwp.org/2008/05/27/imagined-jubilation-by-literary-awards-finalist-caryn-coyle/#comment-199 Masterfuly written. Just enough detail to paint scenes but not excessive. The relationship and its drama are the main thing. I think the story delivers a surprise at the end. By the end of the story most of the vacant spaces in the story are filled in. You feel for Margo; you care. The future is left uncertain. The beginning paragraph is the present. Masterfuly written. Just enough detail to paint scenes but not excessive. The relationship and its drama are the main thing. I think the story delivers a surprise at the end. By the end of the story most of the vacant spaces in the story are filled in. You feel for Margo; you care. The future is left uncertain. The beginning paragraph is the present.

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